Mama
Dada
Doggie
Uh-Oh!
Goodbye doggie
Bye Dada
Baby
Baby
More
No!
No!
Book book
This
Mama
Me
Up down
Hot
Garbage
Diaper
Bye bye
Mama
Mama
No bye
Dada
Baby
This
Girl
Uh-oh!
Cream cheese
Book book
No!
More
Me
Baby
Mama
A Stream of Consciousness Poem in the Style of my One and a Half Year Old Baby
7 responses to “A Stream of Consciousness Poem in the Style of my One and a Half Year Old Baby”
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There’s so much to love about this post, Jenna. It’s a running catalogue of your little one, and I can picture all of the different places and ways these words are uttered. And the ending of “Me…Baby…Mama…”
CHARMING and LOVELY. =))
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This is adorable! I can’t wait for the day my son starts to spew out such poetry.
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Thank you!
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What a wonderful way to slice your day with your little one. I love the random interjections of “uh-oh!” They are so evocative of that specific age. I worry about the announcement of “garbage” in the middle. That sounds ominous. A beautiful ending to the stream-of-consciousness poem.
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So good, my 20 month old grandson says more or less the same although we don’t use the word diaper over here in Australia. Never thought to make it into a poem!
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